Pourquoi pas essayer ^^

La seule et unique chanson que j'ai écrite... en anglais la catastrophe^^
je m'excuse à l'avance des fautes..


There is nothing in the world
Which attract my look
ince you left me
I only think of you
You were my muse
You were my better half
You were my life
Now you are in paradise
And I stay lonely in world

All of this years we have passed together
Were missing since you die
I can't forget them
I won't forget them
They are the only memory
That I have to you

Each night I think of you
Sit in my bed, our bed
I see your face in the dark
You are smiling to me
You have a good new
You will be mother
This little baby in your wonb
Is our futur, our life
But we can't predict the futur
And when the doctor come out towards me
I known mine was finish

All of this years we have passed together
Were missing since you die
I can't forget them
I won't forget them
They are the only memory
That I have to you

c'est super joli!!
parcontre c'est assez mélancolique...

Des petites maladresses au niveau du rythme et des paroles. Oui, il y a des fautes mais bon, on va pas en faire une colline. [Ouais j'aime bien cette expression barbarisée]

Mais l'intention est la. Oui, le thème est un peu tristounet.